hi my name is Daniel. your pice of writing is the best. I like how you talk about farming because thats the thing I like to do too. .mabey next time you should write more words and longer senters.
Hi Like I like your writing but when you said i like to play farming simulator, go on. maybe you can write i like to play farming simulator. I like Go go on the farm with mum and dad. next when you say riding motorbikes and doing motocross.you caught say riding motorbikes on the farm. Lastly my favorate colour is... I also to play may be you caught say i also like to play. But it is really good.
My name is Emiely (pronounced "Emily") and I am a blogger at the Summer Learning Journey. It sounds like you are a great motocross and moterbike rider! How old were you when you started riding?
I know it's a bit tricky to start, but if you wanted to continue blogging over the summer holidays remember to head over to the activities page on the Summer Learning Journey website. You can do these activities in any order. Be sure to remember to post your answers onto your blog.
hi my name is Daniel. your pice of writing is the best. I like how you talk about farming because thats the thing I like to do too. .mabey next time you should write more words and longer senters.
ReplyDeleteHi Luke. I like the motorbikes. I think you might want to change 8 when you are 9 year's. I like your writing.
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Hi Like I like your writing but when you said i like to play farming simulator, go on. maybe you can write i like to play farming simulator. I like Go go on the farm with mum and dad. next when you say riding motorbikes and doing motocross.you caught say riding motorbikes on the farm. Lastly my favorate colour is... I also to play may be you caught say i also like to play. But it is really good.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Luke,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Emiely (pronounced "Emily") and I am a blogger at the Summer Learning Journey. It sounds like you are a great motocross and moterbike rider! How old were you when you started riding?
I know it's a bit tricky to start, but if you wanted to continue blogging over the summer holidays remember to head over to the activities page on the Summer Learning Journey website. You can do these activities in any order. Be sure to remember to post your answers onto your blog.
Summer Learning Journey activities link:
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities/week-one
I hope to be blogging with you this summer!
Noho ora mai,
Emiely :)